I think you did a very good job on the presentation.
However,
Who is going to follow up after the repairs / remedies are performed to 'certify' the house?
Why so cheap?
Isn't it against your SOP to share the report with others? I suppose the seller can authorize the sharing - can the buyer download it free? or who gets the $$$? I would think there would be some problems with 're-selling' a report.
What happens when the buyer gets their own inspector and it conflicts with the original? It will happen, you know.
Is a prudent, intelligent buyer going to 'buy' an inspection report that the seller bought and paid for? I guess some of them actually believe sellers disclosures too.