Michael,
As I was reading your text, I was wondering why you wrote it. Are you planning to put it on your web site? is it going into the real estate section of the Sunday paper? Are you going to hand it out with each inspection, or insert it into each report?

I think we have covered this topic many times here on InspectionNews, and you have covered all of the angles/views. It is well written.

However, I have to say that it was too long for me to hold my interest. I have to admit that I gave up reading word for word early, then scanned some, but when I kept scrolling, I just gave up. Maybe it's the early hours, or that I haven't had my coffee yet. It might even be the "been there, done that, talked it to death" feeling I had while reading it.

I think you could have said it all on one page, but maybe that's for the Reader Digest version.

Again, it looks like you did a great job with it, I'm just not sure of your target audience.
JF