Every area/state has different things they look for and like-dislike in HI contracts. The best thing you can do is spend some time researching your areas trends.

After a quick glance the contract looks like many others out there. My state has a particular preference for LOL (limiation of liability) clauses that are set apart from the other text and are initialled or signed separately. The bold is good. You might consider a bigger font size and and/or a set of initials directly beneath that paragraph.

Again, it's a regional thing... just my $.02